jueves, 29 de octubre de 2009

Writing assignment 5: an article

What can ordinary people do to help in the fight against crime?



Crime is a current topic in today's world, every day in the news appear physical violence or psychological violence and nobody take the challenge seriously to change of this situation.


There are a lot of alternatives to do somthing to change this crime problem but is importan that ordinary people work to help in the fight against crime.

When I was a child my neighbours worked together against crime they used simple things for example when a child went out to played he had to used a whistle in his neck and if somebody unknow appear the child had to blow the whistle and all the neighbours went out to helped, sometimes simple things are exelent alternatives to help.

If the ordinary people, the police or the goberment don't do anything, who can do it? so if you want a change we have to start for us

1 comentario:

  1. You have some good ideas about fighting crime. I think you could develop your idea a bit further in your 2nd paragraph.

    Exist a lot of alternatives = There are a lot of alternatives
    Your 3rd paragraph describes your own personal past experience. The past tense should be used here.

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